When I squint my
eyes
points breaking
around your head.
A cape of
discarded color at my feet.
I talk the dirt
out of my mouth.
I am no expert.
and you're out
there breaking glass.
I filled a whole
notebook with you once
but still you
were missing. There are pink stars
on the red
formica table. The mattress
a pulse of
argument. Next year
New York will be
different
but tonight the
moon
and a small
candle burns
our shadows into
the wall.





Wow- I LOVE this. There is so much here that goes right to the heart of a person, someone that has loved and lost love...
Favorite line... "The mattress
a pulse of argument."
Incredible feeling evoked here.
Oh, Sage- thanks for sharing this...
x
Posted by: Regina | December 01, 2009 at 04:16 PM
I filled my whole notebook with you once
but still you were missing.
Fabulous!
Posted by: chloe De Segonzac | December 01, 2009 at 08:30 PM
That was a great poem. I really enjoyed it.
Posted by: soapstone | December 02, 2009 at 07:51 AM
This is lovely, Sage. Something from our NYU days?
Posted by: Mari L'Esperance | December 02, 2009 at 09:39 PM
______ Awesome!
Really. :) Thank you for sharing!
Posted by: Eliza | December 03, 2009 at 09:06 PM
:::beautiful:::
Posted by: Cat | December 09, 2009 at 05:13 PM
Gorgeous.
Posted by: TerresaWellborn | December 14, 2009 at 11:12 PM
Thanks so much!
Posted by: Sage Cohen | December 15, 2009 at 05:30 AM